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こんな感じ   Please correct my English

Hi Berta

Regarding Activity on Campus

Do we have swimming class ?

I would like to ask following activities what it looks like.
– Teams challenges – Water challenges – Fine art – Group Mural – UK culture club

If you have related move or photos, please let me know.

Many thanks

Yoichi, Milestone

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Corrected English:
Hi Berta,

Regarding Activities on Campus:

Do we have a swimming class offered?

I’m interested in learning more about the following activities:

Team challenges
Water challenges
Fine art
Group mural
UK culture club
If you have any information about these activities, such as schedules, descriptions, or photos, please let me know.

Thank you very much,

Yoichi, Milestone

Changes made:

Added “offered” after “swimming class” to improve clarity.
Corrected capitalization in “Do we have…”
Replaced “what it looks like” with “learning more about” for better flow.
Bullet points for activities for easier reading.
Changed “move” to “information” as it seems more appropriate in context.
Changed “Many thanks” to “Thank you very much” for a more professional tone.
I hope this is helpful! Let me know if you have any other questions.